A pair of Fitz
In response,
and dancing with this theme,
these two Fitz 'fell out'.
Deliberately, I chose to illustrate how the 'title'
can be used to advantage. In the first I started
with a 'quote' and expanded. It came out to 56 words,
so I hyphanated one.
The second was too long, so I took the last lines (above 55 words)
and changed them into a title.
faucon
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and Vi Jones said,
"I truly believe
that our shadows are faithful companions
and that one is never alone
as long as one casts a shadow."
'tis true as the sun-life is born at dawn,
and amber real in the death at evening;
but what of noon 'neath the sun's full glory?
What if our bound companion is not gone
but only masked from our perception --
reaching down to the soul of Mother Earth?
Would that I could only see again!
………………………………………………..
Must I venture on alone,
soul seared by the realities of life?
I can be alone, but never lonely
when you are within my heart and all;
or sorrowfully alone within a crowd.
For your laugher, little one -- my love,
cast a joyful shadow on my soul.
In its caress -- divine shade from chaos,
my finest thoughts emerge.
Yet in the darkness of your fear --
"I truly believe
that our shadows are faithful companions
and that one is never alone
as long as one casts a shadow."
'tis true as the sun-life is born at dawn,
and amber real in the death at evening;
but what of noon 'neath the sun's full glory?
What if our bound companion is not gone
but only masked from our perception --
reaching down to the soul of Mother Earth?
Would that I could only see again!
………………………………………………..
Must I venture on alone,
soul seared by the realities of life?
I can be alone, but never lonely
when you are within my heart and all;
or sorrowfully alone within a crowd.
For your laugher, little one -- my love,
cast a joyful shadow on my soul.
In its caress -- divine shade from chaos,
my finest thoughts emerge.
Yet in the darkness of your fear --
so alone!
1 Comments:
I'm honored, Faucon, that you used my quote to expand on your theme.
Vi
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