Ftizgerald Pantoum - Someone is Getting Carried Away!
The garden where Shakespeare walked
Is planted full of rosemary
Growing wild outside the gate
The holly and the ivy
Planted full of rosemary
This, he said, for remembrance
The holly and the ivy
Pray love, remember
This, he said, for remembrance
Growing wild outside the gate
Pray love, remember
The garden where Shakespeare walked
posted by Unknown @ 9:01 AM
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I'm not sure about the Pantoum either unless you cheat a little. Luckily, according to those who taught me, you can drop an inconsequential word to make the repeated line flow better in its new stanza. This is the only way I got 55 with this . . . I dropped an ‘is’, which did make the flow better as well. Yes, indeed. The Cherita and the Fitz are an interesting puzzle, the Phitzy Pantoum like to make you crazy. And why do it? I can only give you Everest.
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