Monday, May 23, 2005

What is Poetry

Winnie asked this of us, and I am hard put to attempt anything as grand and perceptive as her posted poem. Yet I am drawn to ponder the old question, "Is it the singer or the song?" I would wish to say that as I am a poet, everything I write is poetry -- and cannot be else. Thus I need help here from my friends to decide not only what poetry is, but what makes a poet -- and more profoundly, why many seen driven to write. Up until about five years ago I hardly wrote a thing outside of business stuff. Now, hardly a day passes without writing several poems, stories, reflections. Am I gifted or cursed? I am certainly possessed.

The other day, due to miscommunication and wrong information from the bus company, Em wound up waiting for hours to be picked up, while I talked to the grass at another location. My concern was not nearly as deep as hers -- fearing that something terrible must have happened to me. Later -- safely home, she sat beside me and asked me to write something for her. She says I can share it. I wrote this, just as is without editing. This is the way I think -- the way I speak -- the way it 'flows through me'. Poetry, I don't know -- life, yes!

faucon

My pulse is perhaps slowed a bit
with the touching of your sadness -
and I extend out and within
as of want and call of being;
for there is a tremble in your presence
of which we are not aware in fullness -
from the newness and the nearness of it all.

The melody of your playing
need not shift to minor key -
nor fear that fine strings are broken
on the lyre of our togetherness;
for what you sense
is the breath of lonely
whispering in a duet of longing -
of which you have never been blessed before.

By chance and error of assumption
you were to fear I'd come to harm -
and in an instant of panic
reality set in and down;
for the life we assemble is fragile
and puts us both at risk of fame and fortune -
for of we there must be us or all is mem'ries.

Welcome to true humanity
and the oft bitter sweet passion
that mere mortals embrace in love
that angels may fly divinely;
and know the trembling of my heart and soul
when you are late, gone or choose to walk alone
and I too am skert of being with none but self.

But being two
is what it is
all about,
of course...

and I am here right now.


3 Comments:

At 11:20 PM, Blogger Unknown said...

Now, faucon, what you have is the ability to LIVE poetry. Unusual, rare and remarkable. Most of us have to come to this land with intention; we sojourn, we visit, we weave what we weave here and then must needs walk back into a world more prosaic and flat. You live here. Witness this beautiful explanation for Em that came with out editing, without straining. “I wrote this, just as is without editing. This is the way I think -- the way I speak -- the way it 'flows through me'. Poetry, I don't know -- life, yes!”

Life, yes! Poetry, yes! Maybe they are the same thing.

 
At 6:01 AM, Blogger maya said...

faucon
Your poetry makes me envious of the close and loving relationship you share. My own poetry does not come to me easily or frequently. However, there have been times I've literally had to pull my car over to write down a thought, a few words. I couldn't stop myself. The poetry in me is born at the hour of it's choosing.

 
At 6:13 AM, Blogger Unknown said...

Ah gee, faucon, I'M not the least intimidated! (*snerk*)

Having spent my youth as a very intense, serious, intelligent woman who happened to be a dead ringer for Ewa Aulin, I understand what you say about not being taken seriously, though of course it came from a different source. (Anyone not old enough to remember the 1969 porn’ish movie “Candy” will just have to google Ewa Aulin.)

I also dare say that most poets have the same feeling of never being able to translate what we actually see into words. There is a kind of divine torment that keeps you trying, however. That and the fact that sometimes you do. Not very darn often, but sometimes you hit it between the eyes and are able to translate exactly what you were trying to translate. It has been my experience that these are very seldom poems that the world in general appreciates, but I know when I’ve nailed it and I suppose that is all that counts.

I went through a period of rebellion a few years ago in this regards. I had gone for such a long time thinking that I HAD to translate everything into words, every feeling, every observation, every thought, every imagining. I felt that I had to write, because I could. I couldn’t look at a flower or notice the clouds running across the moon without words forming and when they formed, I felt I had to run for a pen. As if the Muse had given me a gift and it was some kind of sacrilege not to use it at each and every opportunity. I spent quite a bit of time and effort convincing myself that I didn’t have to make a poem out of everything. I could just look, just sense, just see, just feel. In the end, it was a very good thing. I keep learning. Images stay, words come back, experiences are not wasted, but I am better able to let myself experience an experience now.


"Words are easy, like the wind;
Faithful friends are hard to find"
So says the Imortal Bard. Sonnett XXI.

 

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